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Post by KOT/KOH on Jan 1, 2016 10:54:07 GMT -5
ThePaulinho Ronaldo's Video:
SEM's Video:
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Post by giantjames2 on Jan 4, 2016 19:54:36 GMT -5
ThePaulinho Ronaldo: Your video was very dark, that's not a good thing. It looks like you tried a lot harder to hit beats and you took a lot of my advice that I gave you before. I saw a huge improvement in this video compared to your last one I judged. You started out your video by counting what number the match was then later on in your video you just dropped it like it wasn't important or noticeable. It definitely was and that hurt your video a great deal. Your logo should stay on the screen at all moments. So when you showed the song name and had your logo vanish then reappear after the song title was gone it looked horrible. You should have instead showed the song title in the top left if you insisted it gets shown, that way there were no mess ups with your logo. You need to work a little bit more on your cropping, if you look carefully you can still see a little bit of the WWE logo in the bottom right. You did hit a good amount of the important beats but there were very noticeable ones that you just glossed over. An example of that would be at 1:17 when the chorus picked up, you should have had Cena's shoulder hitting Owens right as the beat for the chorus picked up.
SEM: Your video was kind of dark too, but not as bad as Ronaldo's. Good story being told. Nice prematch build up. The entire video could have been a little shorter but it didn't hurt it too much. Overall not a bad video.
Winner: SEM
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