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Post by KOT/KOH on Jan 17, 2016 7:32:08 GMT -5
HTW's Video:
TheGeFreakProductions' Video:
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Post by giantjames2 on Jan 17, 2016 8:16:11 GMT -5
HTW: Anything I'd tell you to fix are things I've already said countless times to improve that still haven't improved much.
TheGeFreakProductions: This is easily your best video since this competition started. I know that because this is the first video of yours that will actually stay in my mind longer than it takes to review it. I think the color effects you used were really good. They helped give the mood of the story being told very well. With that being said though, they were WAY too overpowering. Try to get the shine of the orange a bit lowered when using that effect. The build up was good, just a little too long. The whole video was a little too long. A lot of your timing was good though. The thing about using audio in your videos is that it can really add a great and beautiful touch to everything, but it can also really hurt it. Some of your audio was WAY too loud. Also there were multiple moments when you didn't need the audio, so having it yell over your music hurt the video. You need to learn how to properly fade in and out your audio. It cut short pretty much every time. You should almost always only use audio in parts where there is no singing. When I was first starting out I made these same mistakes. It just takes time to learn. I love your logo. Both the top left and bottom right one. I do think the bottom right one could be improved in 2 ways though. One, move it over to the left just a little bit. It shouldn't be pressed up tight against the edge of the screen. Two, make it just a little bit smaller. It was too small before, and now it's just a little bit too big. Both of those things I said to change are for the bottom right logo. The top left one looks really good. I think the logos work very well together. Finally be careful when using twixtor. I know you can get caught up in how amazing and cool it makes your footage look, I was the same way when I first used it. But it actually becomes a much better addition to your videos when you only use it at the correct moments, like audio.
Winner: TheGeFreakProductions, great job on all of the improvements from your past work.
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