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Post by KOT/KOH on Jan 17, 2016 8:56:31 GMT -5
KOH's Video:
SEM's Video:
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Post by giantjames2 on Jan 17, 2016 10:20:22 GMT -5
KOH: At the start of the lyrics it was saying how they knew what it was like to come back and that they had been down that road before. You could have shown a little black and white clip with a border of Cena retiring Jericho the first time, and then shown all the times they had to come back and start over. Won't hurt your video. But it could have been a lot better with those small changes in it. Overall it was good. No real major issues.
SEM: NO match needs 5 minutes to highlight and if you do make such a long highlight then it needs to be REALLY good to keep peoples attentions. It was way too long. The prematch buildup was also too long. You should never EVER show clips of people talking without using the audio. There are 2 good ways you could have told the backstory. One, you could have had a shorter prematch build and shown just the action clips with no talking clips at all. Two, during that long instrumental you could have shown Zayn preparing to hit Neville with the belt then shown flashbacks with audio of Neville telling Zayn that everybody knows he can't win the big one. Then have the flashbacks come back to the match and show when Zayn got rolled up after getting ready to hit him and have him kick out right as a big beat is coming back in. Overall it wasn't bad. I also hated when you had it switch multiple times from widescreen to full screen then back to widescreen.
Winner: They actually were sort of close, KOH.
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